One of my favourite parts of "Wine From These Grapes" is the title page. (Click on image for a larger view.)
Las magnolias | Magnolias
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Las magnolias Sí, he vuelto a romper la lunaPorque es mayo ahora,Y toda la
lluvia que se cayó en abrilHa levantado en nubes que esconden el sol. Así
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3 days ago
1 comment:
Here's a small poem that could use a little editing.
I suggest getting rid of the "y"'s esp. in line 3 and 4. Shoud have a fine ring to it then.
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