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Here's a small poem that could use a little editing.I suggest getting rid of the "y"'s esp. in line 3 and 4. Shoud have a fine ring to it then.
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Here's a small poem that could use a little editing.
I suggest getting rid of the "y"'s esp. in line 3 and 4. Shoud have a fine ring to it then.
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